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some married couples have just one child, whereas others prefer to have two or more children which option do you think is better and why?

some married couples have just one child, whereas others prefer to have two or more children which option do you think is better and why? k5N88
Marriage is a sacred bond, not just between two bodies, but two souls. Children are the most beautiful part of a marriage. Moreover, children are the future citizens of our world, so it is the duty of parents to bring them up in the best possible way. Now the issue is whether a couple should have only a single child or two or more children. It is a controversial and complicated debate, so before reaching any conclusion, i would like to discuss the merits and demerits of both the options in the forthcoming paragraphs. There are innumerable advantages of a couple having just one child. To begin with, parents can easily afford to provide high-quality education and other facilities to a single child. Secondly, they can pay their full attention to nurturing the abilities and natural talents of their child. However, there are also some serious disadvantages of a couple having only one child. First and foremost, an only child feels very lonely and he is not able to learn many important social skills. Secondly, a single child is often too pampered and sheltered, he is likely to have some behavioural problems such as stubbornness. On the other hand, a main benefit of a couple having two or more children is that such children are well-adjusted as they get an opportunity to learn about caring and sharing from a very young age. Apart from this, parents are able to get sufficient help and support from their children in old age. In contrast, the most worrisome drawback of a couple having two or more children is that their education and upbringing puts too much financial burden on the parents. Besides, such parents may fail to give adequate time and attention to every child. To wind up the discussion, how many children to have is a personal decision, which every couple should make carefully, after weighing the pros and cons of all the alternatives. Moreover, a single child is too lonely, and more than one child is difficult to raise. But I personally feel that having exactly two children is a best alternative for a married couple.
Marriage is a sacred bond, not
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between two bodies,
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two souls.
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Children
are the most
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part of a marriage.
Moreover
,
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are the future citizens of our world,
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it is the duty of
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parents
to bring them up in the best possible way.
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the issue is whether a
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should have
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a
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single
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or two or more
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children
. It is a controversial and complicated debate,
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before
reaching any conclusion,
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would like to discuss the merits and demerits of both the options in the forthcoming paragraphs.

There are innumerable advantages of a
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couple
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having
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just
one
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child
. To
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with,
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parents
can
easily
afford to provide high-quality education and other facilities to a
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.
Secondly
, they can pay their full attention to nurturing the abilities and natural talents of their child.

However
, there are
also
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serious disadvantages of a
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having
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only
one
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child
.
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and foremost, an
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child
feels
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lonely and
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social
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is
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too pampered and sheltered, he is likely to have
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problems such as stubbornness.

On the other hand
, a main benefit of a
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couple
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having
two or more
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children
is that such
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children
are well-adjusted as they
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get
an opportunity to learn about caring and sharing from a
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young age. Apart from this,
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are able to
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sufficient
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in
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age.

In contrast
, the most worrisome drawback of a
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couple
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two or more
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children
is that their education and upbringing puts too much financial burden on the
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.
Besides
, such
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may fail to give adequate time and attention to every child.

To wind up the discussion, how
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children
to have is a personal decision, which every
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should
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carefully
, after weighing the pros and cons of all the alternatives.
Moreover
, a
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single
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child
is too lonely, and more than one
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is difficult to raise.
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I
personally
feel that
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exactly two
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a
best alternative for a married
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IELTS essay some married couples have just one child, whereas others prefer to have two or more children which option do you think is better and why?

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