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which one makes more sense, online/distant learning or offline/conventional learning?

which one makes more sense, online/distant learning or offline/conventional learning? dmrX
The Covid-19 resulted in schools being shut down all over the country. As a result, education has undergone major changes, with the advent of e-learning, in which teaching is performed remotely and through digital platforms. Research shows that online learning has been shown to improve the preservation of knowledge and take less time, which means that the coronavirus modifications may have allowed it to remain. With this unexpected turn away from offline learning in several parts of the world, others are questioning the acceptance of online learning.
The Covid-19 resulted in schools
being shut
down all over the country.

As a result
, education has undergone major
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
, with the advent of e-learning, in which teaching
is performed
remotely
and through digital platforms. Research
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that online learning has
been shown
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the preservation of knowledge and take less time, which means that the coronavirus modifications may have
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allowed
it to remain. With this unexpected turn away from offline learning in several parts of the world, others are questioning the acceptance of online learning.

IELTS essay which one makes more sense, online/distant learning or offline/conventional learning?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
87 words
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