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The Covid-19 resulted in schools being shut down all over the country.

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The Covid-19 resulted in schools being shut down all over the country. As a result, education has undergone major changes, with the advent of e-learning, in which teaching is performed remotely and through digital platforms. Research shows that online learning has been shown to improve the preservation of knowledge and take less time, which means that the coronavirus modifications may have allowed it to remain. With this unexpected turn away from offline learning in several parts of the world, others are questioning the acceptance of online learning. First, the main objective of online learning is to keep learning and reduce cases of the spread of the Covid-19 virus. Which until now the Covid-19 cases are still increasing. Online learning is still being carried out because there are interests related to the education sector. Other sectors such as medical personnel and the economy are of course also affected by this pandemic. However, the education sector can still maintain the quality of education even though it has to be online.
The Covid-19 resulted in schools
being shut
down all over the country.

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,
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education
has undergone major
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changes
, with the advent of e-learning, in which teaching
is performed
remotely
and through digital platforms. Research
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shows
that
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online
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learning
has
been shown
to
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improve
the preservation of knowledge and take less time, which means that the coronavirus modifications may have
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allowed
it to remain. With this unexpected turn away from offline
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learning
in several parts of the world, others are questioning the acceptance of
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online
learning.

First
, the main objective of
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online
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learning
is to
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keep
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learning
and
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reduce
cases of the spread of the Covid-19 virus. Which until
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now
the Covid-19 cases are
still
increasing.
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Online
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learning
is
still
being carried
out
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because
there are interests related to the
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education
sector. Other sectors such as medical personnel and the economy are
of course
also
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affected
by this pandemic.
However
, the
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education
sector can
still
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education
even though
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IELTS essay The Covid-19 resulted in schools being shut down all over the country.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
168 words
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