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Which of the following is the best time to study to improve your ability to master the material: morning, afternoon, or night? Use details and examples to support your explanation v.1

Which of the following is the best time to study to improve your ability to master the material: morning, afternoon, or night? Use details and examples to support your explanation v. 1
Over the last few years, daily life of a common man has improved a lot, due to the advancement of technology. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement, many innovative things have been introduced by technology for the comfort and luxury. Likewise, people can do shopping without visiting shopping malls. To embark upon, the Internet has made lives much simpler for everyone on day to day basis. This is because, it reduces regular tasks of our daily life with the help of smart devices, are connected to the internet does task without human intervention. For example, Smart speaker Amazon's Alexa smart speaker does many repetitive jobs at home, just giving instructions such as switch off/on lights, music sound system or Television and many other things which are all connected with internet. In addition, at present online shopping is the best inventions as it saves time and energy. People can order any product from home by visiting an e-commerce website through smart phones or laptops which saves lots of time and energy. For example, E-commerce giant Amazon, anyone can buy any products from amazon sitting at home and Amazon delivered ordered products at your doorstep. In a recent survey conducted by Microsoft company, as of now online business is growing at an exponential rate of 300%, by the end of 2030 online businesses will be the only source of business in the world. In conclusion, it is undeniable that, many innovative ideas are introduced by Information technology, which is creating wonders these days. Helping people in dealing daily with repetitive tasks and changing the whole structure of work or doing business across the globe.
Over the last few years, daily life of a common
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man
has
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improved
a lot, due to the advancement of technology. In my opinion, I completely
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agree
with the statement,
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many
innovative things have
been introduced
by technology for the comfort and luxury.
Likewise
,
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people
can
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do shopping
without visiting shopping malls.

To embark upon, the Internet has made
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lives
much simpler for everyone on
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day to day
basis. This is
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because
, it
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reduces
regular tasks of our daily life with the
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help
of
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smart
devices,
are connected
to the internet does task without human intervention.
For example
,
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Smart
speaker Amazon's Alexa
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smart
speaker does
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many
repetitive jobs at home,
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just
giving instructions such as switch off/on lights, music sound system or Television and
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many
other things which are all connected with internet.

In addition
, at present online shopping is the best inventions as it saves time and energy.
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People
can order any product from home by visiting an e-commerce website through
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smart
phones or laptops which saves lots of time and energy.
For example
, E-commerce giant Amazon, anyone can
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buy
any products from
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amazon
sitting at home and Amazon delivered ordered products at your doorstep. In a recent survey conducted by Microsoft
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company
, as of
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now
online
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business
is growing at an exponential rate of 300%, by the
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end
of 2030 online
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businesses
will be the
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only
source of
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business
in the world.

In conclusion
, it is undeniable that,
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many
innovative
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ideas
are introduced
by Information technology, which is creating wonders these days. Helping
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in dealing daily with repetitive tasks and changing the whole structure of work or doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
across the globe.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Which of the following is the best time to study to improve your ability to master the material: morning, afternoon, or night? Use details and examples to support your explanation v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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