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Which of the following functions of smart phones are most beneficial to styudents? 1) taking photos, 2) listening to myusic 3)recording lectures

Which of the following functions of smart phones are most beneficial to styudents? 1) taking photos, 2) listening to myusic 3)recording lectures D617E
Smart phones with their different programs become part of our life. The first smart phone was creating 1883 in America by the matarola company. That phone can only call. But now people can use phone as a recorder, camera, device for listening music. I thing that more importent recording lectures for styudents but no less importent taking photos and listening music. Certainly, by means of taking photo styudents can take photos of lessons, making very beautifull photos with friends and ets. Listening music can discharge the styudents. It seems to me that all of this functions are importent for everyone.
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of lessons, making
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with friends and
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IELTS essay Which of the following functions of smart phones are most beneficial to styudents? 1) taking photos, 2) listening to myusic 3)recording lectures

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