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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The government should forbid violence and bad language in TV programs. use specific reasons and examples in yo answer.ur

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Watching TV is very interesting hobby to a not-so-small number of people in the world. There are various programs hired on them; they include news, documentaries, different shows such as comedies, movies, and many others. All of these are watched by millions and millions of people who look up to whatever these tv programs teach them. that is why the government has to ban violence and bad language on TV programs. Young people are the future of our countries, if they get destroyed morally, the country is also damaged. many people enjoy watching tv programs and they are truly interesting, but the government has to set boundaries on what to watch and twhat to not watch.
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IELTS essay The government should forbid violence and bad language in TV programs. use specific reasons and examples in yo answer. ur

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116 words
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