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Which mode of transport is used more in UK. Write your comparisions.

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The statistical report reveals the massive amounts of goods transported to UK. The analysis was made on four different modes of transport, in order to investigate which mode is the finest. For twenty-eight years, There is a rapid rise of importing goods to the country using roadways, rather than other means of transport. Waterways from shipping industry had overtaken railway in four year and is under abated conditions of fourty-million tonnes. comparatively, Pipeline mode of transportation and rai seemed to be used rarely than most used one, road, and water.
The statistical report reveals the massive amounts of
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goods
transported to UK. The analysis
was made
on four
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different
modes of transport, in order to investigate which mode is the finest. For twenty-eight years, There is a rapid rise of importing
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goods
to the country using roadways,
rather
than other means of transport.

Waterways from shipping industry had overtaken railway in four year and is under abated conditions of
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fourty-million
tonnes.
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comparatively
, Pipeline mode of transportation and
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rai
seemed to be
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used
Use "(rarely)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
rarely
than most
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used
one, road, and water.

IELTS essay Which mode of transport is used more in UK. Write your comparisions.

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90 words
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