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Describe what you enjoyed about the course.Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course.suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course. suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer JRde
I am writing this about your cooking courseI like a cooking. i helping my morther to prepare a food in a kitchen. now when i start a cookery course and i have achieve a most knowledge about a cooking. this cooking course is most important for me because my future dream is a i am a great chef of my country. I learn a daily Different -Different Receipe Pasta, pizza, maggi, rolls etc. This dishes are very helpful for my cooking carrier. My dream is a one day i am a great chef of india. I learn many western dishes in my cooking course. Well i advice a one more cooking course done because my country people are very foody. They like Junk food and western food. I have start a course for western dishes. Western dishes are famous all of world so i will take western dishes cooking course. i look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerly, Martin
I am writing this about your cooking
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courseI
like a cooking.
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i
helping my
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morther
to prepare
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a food
in a kitchen.
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now
when
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i
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start
a cookery
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course
and
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i
have
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achieve
a most knowledge about a cooking.
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this
cooking
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course
is most
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important
for me
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because
my future dream is
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a
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i
am a great chef of my country. I learn a daily
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Different
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Different
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Receipe
Pasta, pizza,
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maggi
, rolls etc.
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This
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dishes
are
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very
helpful for my cooking carrier. My dream is a one day
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i
am a great chef of
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india
. I learn
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many
western
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dishes
in my cooking
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course
. Well i advice a one more cooking
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course
done
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because
my country
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people
are
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very
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foody
. They like Junk food and western food. I have
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start
a
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course
for western
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dishes
. Western
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dishes
are
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famous
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all of world
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so
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i
will take western
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dishes
cooking
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course
.
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i
look forward to hearing from you. Yours
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sincerly
,
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Martin

IELTS essay Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course. suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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