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Describe what you enjoyed about the course.Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course.suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course. suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer JRde

I am writing this about your cooking courseI like a cooking. i helping my morther to prepare a food in a kitchen. now when i start a cookery course and i have achieve a most knowledge about a cooking. this cooking course is most important for me because my future dream is a i am a great chef of my country. I learn a daily Different -Different Receipe Pasta, pizza, maggi, rolls etc. This dishes are very helpful for my cooking carrier. My dream is a one day i am a great chef of india. I learn many western dishes in my cooking course. Well i advice a one more cooking course done because my country people are very foody. They like Junk food and western food. I have start a course for western dishes. Western dishes are famous all of world so i will take western dishes cooking course. i look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerly, Martin

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start
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famous
Consider using "all world" or "all of the world".all worldall of the world
all of world
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so
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 will take western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplatecontainercuppotbowlplatter
dishes
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 look forward to hearing from you. Yours Possible spelling mistake found.sincerely
sincerly
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Martin