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technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument. N9bj
Education is one the most important factors in our personal development. The last few decades demonstrated the increased number of people that are getting a University degree. Thus, everyone should get the same quality of education. The positive and negative points of free education will be discussed in this essay. Firstly, I believe that primary and secondary school education for our kids is very important and makes a good basis to later success in their life. The government should provide a good terms and salary to increase the quality of teachers. Thus, the good primary and secondary school education must be available for free to everyone, no matter of their income. Secondly, colleges and universities may charge study fees based on students' economic situation or family income. As an example, international as well as students from financially stable families are usually able to pay higher fees. It will allow to reduce the fees for students from poor families. Moreover, good salaries for University staff may ensure that the level of teaching will not be impacted. Additionally, the government should financially support educational establishments to fund research and development projects. To conclude, our future depends on the growing generation. It is very important that this generation will get the proper level of education that it deserves. The government should provide free primary and secondary education, while keeping it possible for students to continue and get an affordable post-secondary degree.
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factors in our personal development. The last few decades demonstrated the increased number of
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people
that are getting a University degree.
Thus
, everyone should
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get
the same quality of
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education
. The
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positive
and
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negative
points of free
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in this essay.

Firstly
, I believe that primary and secondary school
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education
for our kids is
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very
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important
and
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makes
a
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good
basis to later success in their life. The
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government
should provide a
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good
terms and salary to increase the quality of teachers.
Thus
, the
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good
primary and secondary school
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education
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must
be available for free to everyone, no matter of their income.

Secondly
, colleges and universities may charge study fees based on students' economic situation or family income. As an example, international
as well
as students from
financially
stable families are
usually
able to pay higher fees. It will
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allow
to
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reduce
the fees for students from poor families.

Moreover
,
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good
salaries for University staff may ensure that the level of teaching will not
be impacted
.
Additionally
, the
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government
should
financially
support educational establishments to fund research and development projects.

To conclude
, our future depends on the growing generation. It is
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very
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important
that this generation will
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get
the proper level of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
that it deserves. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should provide free primary and secondary
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education
, while keeping it possible for students to continue and
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get
an affordable post-secondary degree.

IELTS essay technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
238 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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