Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Which members of a community might typically oppose a Wal-Mart Supercenter? What are their objections? How can Wal-Mart answer these complaints?

Which members of a community might typically oppose a Wal-Mart Supercenter? What are their objections? How can Wal-Mart answer these complaints? RkEBQ
Walmart has problems with numerous citizens like ecologists, politicians, and union leaders. But as per my research, I think labor-law enforcement would oppose Walmart for ill-treating their employees. Wal-Mart has issues with their employees and knows for providing a poor working environment and low wages. Approximately 70% of their employees leave their job within a year. Walmart is also criticized for being an anti-union organization. Most Wal-Mart employees do not get paid "generous" wages. Thus, it leads to conflicts between union leaders and some politicians. There were many protests against the company's unfair ways of treating employees. Their thinking seems to be that going union would hurt their bottom line, and take them out of the number one retailer spot. All of Wal-Mart's competitors are unionized. They simply decided to avoid all the trouble. Wal-Mart has decided to go up against labor laws to keep its overhead lower. However, companies should understand and work in the interest of their employees. After all, they are the bone of the company. According to me, Walmart should organize and sponsor union elections to gain their trust.
Walmart has problems with numerous citizens like ecologists, politicians, and union leaders.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
as per my research, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
labor-law enforcement would oppose Walmart for ill-treating their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Wal-Mart
has issues with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
and knows for providing a poor working environment and low wages. Approximately 70% of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
their job within a year. Walmart is
also
criticized for being an anti-union organization. Most
Possible spelling mistake found.
Wal-Mart
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
paid
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
generous
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
wages.
Thus
, it leads to conflicts between union leaders and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
politicians. There were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
protests against the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's unfair ways of treating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
. Their thinking seems to be that going union would hurt their bottom line, and take them out of the number one retailer spot. All of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Wal-Mart
's competitors
are unionized
. They
simply
decided to avoid all the trouble.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Wal-Mart
has decided to go up against labor laws to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
its
overhead lower.

However
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
should understand and work in the interest of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
.
After all
, they are the bone of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".
According to me
, Walmart should organize and sponsor union elections to gain their trust.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Which members of a community might typically oppose a Wal-Mart Supercenter? What are their objections? How can Wal-Mart answer these complaints?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
183 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Which members of a community might typically oppose a Wal-Mart Supercenter? What are their objections? How can Wal-Mart answer these complaints?