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Describe a book that you would like to read again What the book was about Why you read it the first place What you learned from this book And explain why you would like to read it again.

Describe a book that you would like to read again What the book was about Why you read it the first place What you learned from this book And explain why you would like to read it again. D69OW
Okay so I would like to tell you about the book called Harry Potter, which is a fantasy novel, written by the British author J. K. Rowling. It’s one that I can reread time and time again. The book describes the life of a young wizard named Harry Potter and his two best friends, Ron and Hermione. Harry has to struggle to kill the Dark wizard Lord Voldemort, whose aim is to become immortal and destroy all those who stand in his way of ruling the world. The reason why this book comes to mind is that it is a reminder of my childhood. It was a gift for my birthday from my parents to reward my high score in an exam at school. Up until now, I can still remember clearly how fascinated I was when I received it. Thanks to this book, I realized that determination and effort play essential roles in achieving my goals. Since then, I have always worked hard to overcome all obstacles and challenges in my life. Harry Potter will always be on my to-read list for a number of reasons. Firstly, I have always been a great admirer of science fiction books so I love the way that the author describes the whole magical world with the magic school, Hogwarts, and the flying brooms. Secondly, reading this book not only helps me to relax after a long day of work or study but also cheers me up whenever I am feeling blue
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called Harry Potter, which is a fantasy novel, written by the British author J. K. Rowling. It’s one that I can reread time and time again.

The
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the life of a young wizard named Harry Potter and his two best friends, Ron and Hermione. Harry
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struggle to kill the Dark wizard Lord Voldemort, whose aim is to become immortal and
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all those who stand in his way of ruling the world.

The reason why this
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to mind is that it is a reminder of my childhood. It was a gift for my birthday from my parents to reward my high score in an exam at school. Up until
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how fascinated I was when I received it.

Thanks to this
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, I realized that determination and effort play essential roles in achieving my goals. Since then, I have always worked
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to overcome all obstacles and challenges in my life.

Harry Potter will always be on my to-read list for a number of reasons.
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, I have always been a great admirer of science fiction
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I
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the way that the author
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the whole magical world with the magic school, Hogwarts, and the flying brooms.
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, reading this
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IELTS essay Describe a book that you would like to read again What the book was about Why you read it the first place What you learned from this book And explain why you would like to read it again.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
248 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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