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"I love you. Both of you." She whispered and kissed them softly. Both of them snuggled closer to her in their sleep. Zach and Xavier, both on each side of her. They were all pressed together on her small bed which ain't something new. They've done it many times that anyone could've lost the count. It's extremely uncomfortable but they love it this way because they love each other.

"I love you. Both of you. " She whispered and kissed them softly. Both of them snuggled closer to her in their sleep. Zach and Xavier, both on each side of her. They were all pressed together on her small bed which ain't something new. They've done it many times that anyone could've lost the count. It's extremely uncomfortable but they love it this way because they love each other. le2D9
"I love you. Both of you. " She whispered and kissed them softly. Both of them snuggled closer to her in their sleep. Zach and Xavier, both on each side of her. They were all pressed together on her small bed which ain't something new. They've done it many times that anyone could've lost the count. It's extremely uncomfortable but they love it this way because they love each other. "I love you. Both of you. " She whispered and kissed them softly. Both of them snuggled closer to her in their sleep. Zach and Xavier, both on each side of her. They were all pressed together on her small bed which ain't something new. They've done it many times that anyone could've lost the count. It's extremely uncomfortable but they love it this way because they love each other.
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Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
love
you. Both of you.
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
She whispered and kissed them
softly
. Both of them snuggled closer to her in their sleep. Zach and Xavier, both on each side of her. They were all pressed together on her
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
bed which ain't something new. They've done it
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many
times that anyone could've lost the count. It's
extremely
uncomfortable
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but
they
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love
it this way
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IELTS essay "I love you. Both of you. " She whispered and kissed them softly. Both of them snuggled closer to her in their sleep. Zach and Xavier, both on each side of her. They were all pressed together on her small bed which ain't something new. They've done it many times that anyone could've lost the count. It's extremely uncomfortable but they love it this way because they love each other.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
140 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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