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Which leader is important for u. Explain why with reasons and examples.

Which leader is important for u. Explain why with reasons and examples. 2bgrX
The leader who comes to my mind and very important is Mahatma Gandhi. He is a leader who brought a significant change for India and changed the people's thought all over the world towards injustice. His original name is Mohan Dash Karam Chand Gandhi. The nonviolence movement leaded by him and his teachings of the power of the truth are the most significant impacts upon my country India. He is a role model for many indian youth since his non- violence movements was a huge success for bringing India's independence. First and foremost, Mahatma Gandhi is important for me because. . .
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IELTS essay Which leader is important for u. Explain why with reasons and examples.

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102 words
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