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QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK WHEN A PERSON TRAVELS INTO A DIFFERENT CULTURE THEY SHOULD ADAPT TO THE LOCAL PRACTICES AND CUSTOMES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE?

QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK WHEN A PERSON TRAVELS INTO A DIFFERENT CULTURE THEY SHOULD ADAPT TO THE LOCAL PRACTICES AND CUSTOMES. YL3gB
Number of people believes that a person travels to a foreign country he has to learn the local cultural practices and the customs that local people are following. Consequently, the individual will be able to survive in that unknown place. I partially agree with this point, adapting to the foreign situation is necessary because it might help a person to full fill their need of travelling to that area. Culture and customs of a country will help to get along with the native people and also helps to overcome all the difficulties that may happen unexpectedly. On the other hand, plethora of people also survived without practicing the local cultural rules. To begin with, a person gets chances from various sources to move from one country to another or it may be to exotic destination. In relation to that, there are also lots of hardships that may arise as the place is totally new to them. Consequently, to tackle that scenario they have to get along with local people. In order to create bond with them, practising the cultural normal and customs of that particular place is playing crucial role. To explain clearly, an entrepreneur travels to place to expand their business. They have to adapt themselves to the place. Consequently, they might be able to identify the strength, weakness, opportunities and their target customer in that foreign place. On the contrary, with the help of global language English numerous people are surviving for long term in various foreign countries where the language is being spoken fluently. For example, European country, some parts of Asia English has become a common language in the curriculum of an individual. In conclusion, it depends upon the goal of visiting the particular place. If it is for business or residing purpose they have get adapt to the culture in order to survive in the long run. On the other hand, for vacation purpose It is not necessary to get complete knowledge about the cultural.
Number of
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people
believes that a person travels to a
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foreign
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country
he
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has to
learn the
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local
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cultural
practices and the customs that
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local
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people
are following.
Consequently
, the individual will be able to survive in that unknown place.

I
partially
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agree
with this point, adapting to the
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foreign
situation is necessary
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because
it might
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help
a person to full fill their need of travelling to that area.

Culture and customs of a
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country
will
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help
to
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get
along with the native
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people
and
also
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helps
to overcome all the difficulties that may happen
unexpectedly
.
On the other hand
, plethora of
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people
also
survived without practicing the
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local
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cultural
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rules
.

To
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begin
with, a person
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gets
chances from various sources to
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move
from one
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country
to another or it may be to exotic destination. In relation to that, there are
also
lots of hardships that may arise as the
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place
is
totally
new to them.
Consequently
, to tackle that scenario they
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have to
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get
along with
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local
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people
. In order to create bond with them,
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practising
the
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cultural
normal and customs of that particular
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place
is playing crucial role. To
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explain
clearly
, an entrepreneur travels to
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place
to expand their business. They
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have to
adapt themselves to the
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place
.
Consequently
, they might be able to identify the strength, weakness, opportunities and their target customer in that
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foreign
place.

On the contrary
, with the
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help
of global language English numerous
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people
are surviving for long term in various
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foreign
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countries
where the language is
being spoken
fluently
.
For example
, European
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country
,
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some
parts of Asia English has become a common language in the curriculum of an individual.

In conclusion
, it depends upon the goal of visiting the particular
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place
. If it is for business or residing purpose they have
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get
adapt to the culture in order to survive in the long run.
On the other hand
, for vacation purpose It is not necessary to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
complete knowledge about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cultural
.
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IELTS essay QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK WHEN A PERSON TRAVELS INTO A DIFFERENT CULTURE THEY SHOULD ADAPT TO THE LOCAL PRACTICES AND CUSTOMES.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
330 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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