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CROP CIRCLE. INTEGRATED ESSAY.

CROP CIRCLE. INTEGRATED ESSAY. pRDL2

The reading passage and the lecture have contrast data regarding the crop circles. The passage mainly highlights the crop circles to be man made where as the lecture discards this idea with some scientific data. The passage presents the possible data of crop circle to be created by men with the evidence of certain experiments, on the contrary, the lecture says that the cataloged photography of the crop circles by serious scientists are similar to the geometric or mirror processing in quantum physics. He also points out that the crop circles have the pattern similar to Gerald Hawkin's geometric 4th and 5th theorem, which is itself mysterious. Secondly, the lecture casts doubt about the crop circles that it could be due to the effect of sound vibration. He also states about the Egyptian geometry as frozen music to support his statement. As per this theory, the low frequency is more complex than the high frequency of sound. Furthermore he adds, infra sound boil the water and plant stems within 1 nano sec, which result in very high intense high heat. Another point is that, the plants nodes are hugely extended, the seed embryos are matured and ripen and the crystalline are reorganized, which is not possible by humans. In addition, the lecture emphasizes another possible cause with the evidence of soil samples. These samples are taken from the crop circle and it shows that the characteristics crystalline structures that is suggested to be 1500 degree celsius. Thus, it strongly discards the crop circles created by men.

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lecture
 have contrast data regarding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
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circles
. The passage mainly
 highlights the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
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circles
 to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 made Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
 discards this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
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some
 scientific data.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 passage presents the possible data of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspherering
circle
 to be created
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 with the evidence of certain experiments, on the contrary
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
 says that the cataloged photography of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspherering
circles
 by serious scientists are similar to the geometric or mirror processing in quantum physics. He also
 points out that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
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circles
 have the pattern similar to Gerald Possible spelling mistake found.HawkinsHawkingHaw kinHawk in
Hawkin
's geometric 4th and 5th theorem, which is itself mysterious.

Secondly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
 casts doubt about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspherering
circles
 that it could be due to the effect of sound vibration. He also
 states about the Egyptian geometry as frozen music to support his statement. As per this theory, the low frequency is more complex than the high frequency of sound. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
, infra sound boil the water and plant stems within 1 Possible spelling mistake found.NATOANOKanoNAONan
nano
 sec, which result in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 high intense high heat. Another point is that, the plants nodes are hugely
 extended, the seed embryos are matured
 and ripen and the crystalline are reorganized
, which is not possible by humans.

In addition
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
 emphasizes another possible cause with the evidence of soil samples. These samples are taken
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspherering
circle
 and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that the characteristics crystalline structures that is suggested
 to be 1500 degree Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
celsius
. Thus
, it strongly
 discards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutputproductproduceyield
crop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspherering
circles
 created by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
. 