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The trasnportation and communication like airplanes and telephone are very imporatant innovations.Which technological innovation chaged the way of interaction eith each other and why?

The trasnportation and communication like airplanes and telephone are very imporatant innovations. Which technological innovation chaged the way of interaction eith each other and why? NrnVq
The 20th century is the era of technology, as we are enjoying the benefits of the advancement in technologies in our day to day life. So personally, I believe the internet is another technological innovation to be very important that has played a vital role in interacting with each other in many different ways. Internet is a blessing in disguise for the modern age, because of it's fastestness and convenience. In addition, iternet provides more securities of our personal information in comparison to other means of communication. First and foremost, the internet has empowered people to. . .
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IELTS essay The trasnportation and communication like airplanes and telephone are very imporatant innovations. Which technological innovation chaged the way of interaction eith each other and why?

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