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which kind of weather are your prefer?Why?

which kind of weather are your prefer? Why? AgLAe
Unlike the weather condition in Europe and America where it has a noticeable difference between summer and winter (the former is extremely hot, while the latter is the reverse), weather in Asian countries, specifically in Vietnam, has a stable temperature range throughout the year. However, the amount of rain in these countries’ seasons varies, especially in summertime and wintertime. In summer, or as I call it the “rainy season”, downpours are the norm in every city and town in my country. From day to night, rains soak the streets, dampen the houses’ rooftops, and sometimes cause flood in areas whose sewer system is underdeveloped. The temperature in this season, to no one’s surprise, is quite high and usually reaches the peak at midday, so it is recommended to stay hydrated to survive the heat. Meanwhile, in winter, which is alternatively named “dry season”, there is basically no snow in most areas in my country. Instead, drought goes on for days, making me suffer from the lack of refreshing weather. Despite this, winter is not completely horrible as early in the morning, cool winds fly to my face, which gives me chillness and sometimes makes me shake my teeth. If I have to choose which season is my favorite, I would say that summer is easily my choice simply because it has continual rain, which is my most loved weather, and I do not care about the extreme heat, so summer would be my pick.
Unlike the
weather
condition in Europe and America where it has a noticeable difference between
summer
and winter (the former is
extremely
hot, while the latter is the reverse),
weather
in Asian
countries
,
specifically
in Vietnam, has a stable temperature range throughout the year.
However
, the amount of rain in these
countries’
seasons
varies,
especially
in
summertime
and wintertime. In
summer
, or as I call it the “rainy
season”
, downpours are the norm in every city and town in my
country
. From day to night, rains soak the streets, dampen the
houses
’ rooftops, and
sometimes
cause flood in areas whose sewer system
is underdeveloped
. The temperature in this
season
, to no one’s surprise, is quite high and
usually
reaches the peak at midday,
so
it
is recommended
to stay hydrated to survive the heat. Meanwhile, in winter, which is
alternatively
named “dry
season”
, there is
basically
no snow in most areas in my
country
.
Instead
, drought goes on for days, making me suffer from the lack of refreshing
weather
. Despite this, winter is not completely horrible as early in the morning, cool winds
fly
to my face, which gives me chillness and
sometimes
makes
me shake my teeth. If I
have to
choose which
season
is my favorite, I would say that
summer
is
easily
my choice
simply
because
it has continual rain, which is my most
loved
weather
, and I do not care about the extreme heat,
so
summer
would be my pick.
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IELTS essay which kind of weather are your prefer? Why?

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