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Devoloping the economy will always damage the environment.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Devoloping the economy will always damage the environment. 7LAE5
In this contemporary era, there are a lot of devolopments going on in our country to raise our economy however to some extent it leads to environmental problems. I partially agree that devoloping economy damages the environment. To commence with, in devoloping countries it is necessary to raise the economy for thedevelopment of nations. sometimes while only concentrating about the countries economy we forget about the effects that environment will go through. Initially, the number of settlements everywhere are increasing day by day and the requirements of each peoples too. It compells the government to raise economy to achieve development. Secondly, the passing of bills and acts are also a major activities that tends to environmental damage. For example the athirapilly hydel power project in kerala and the controversy. Although it is good for the raising of economy but its devastating for the nature. Furthermore, construction of factories in any country is a milestone for its growth however, gradually it causes the earth to crumble down. On the other hand, devoloping the economy is not only the reason for damaging environment. there are a lot of factors responsible for occurrence of environmental problems. For instance, the natural disasters like eathquakes, cyclones, tsunami etc are not happening because of devoloping economy. Moreover, we have devoloped so many ecotourism spots and devoloped wildlife sanctuaries, biosphere reserves etc. These are all positive effects of economical progress in some nations. Not only but also, if there is an economic progress then there will be an environmental problem is much more heard less in todays world because each and everyone in the world are trying to live in an eco-friendly way. Therefore, whether there is economical progression either in buisnesses or in any other fields in the nation. mostb of them try to do it with an environmental friendly pathway, so we cannot assert that devoloping economy will always damage the economy. In conclusion with, there are a lot more things to be considered while analysing the effect of economical progression in the nature. However, devoloping economy is not only the reason for environmental damage rather it promotes environmental progression to some extent.
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a lot of
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devolopments
going on in our
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country
to raise our
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economy
however
to
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some
extent it leads to
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environmental
problems. I
partially
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agree
that
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devoloping
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economy
damages the environment.

To commence with, in
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devoloping
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countries
it is necessary to raise the
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economy
for
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thedevelopment
of nations.
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sometimes
while
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only
concentrating about the
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countries
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economy
we forget about the effects that environment will go through.
Initially
, the number of settlements everywhere are increasing day by day and the requirements of each
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peoples
too. It
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compells
the
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government
to raise
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economy
to achieve development.
Secondly
, the passing of bills and acts are
also
a major
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activities
that tends to
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environmental
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damage
.
For example
the
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athirapilly
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hydel
power project in
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kerala
and the controversy. Although it is
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good
for the raising of
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economy
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but
its devastating for the nature.
Furthermore
, construction of factories in any
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country
is a milestone for its growth
however
,
gradually
it causes the earth to crumble down.

On the other hand
,
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devoloping
the
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economy
is not
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only
the reason for damaging environment.
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there
are
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a lot of
factors responsible for occurrence of
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environmental
problems.
For instance
, the natural disasters like
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eathquakes
, cyclones, tsunami etc are not happening
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because
of
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devoloping
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economy
.
Moreover
, we have
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devoloped
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so
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many
ecotourism spots and
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devoloped
wildlife sanctuaries, biosphere reserves etc. These are all
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positive
effects of
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economical
progress in
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some
nations. Not
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only
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but
also
, if there is an economic progress then there will be an
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environmental
problem is much more heard less in
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todays
world
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because
each and
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everyone
in the world are trying to
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live
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in an eco-friendly way
.
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, whether there is economical progression either in
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buisnesses
or in any other fields in the nation.
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mostb
of them try to do it with an
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environmental
friendly pathway,
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so
we cannot assert that
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devoloping
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economy
will always
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damage
the economy.

In conclusion
with, there are a lot more things to
be considered
while
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analysing
the effect of economical progression in the nature.
However
,
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devoloping
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economy
is not
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only
the reason for
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environmental
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damage
rather
it promotes
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environmental
progression to
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some
extent.
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IELTS essay Devoloping the economy will always damage the environment.

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