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personal statement and career future

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Is it possible to become a competent doctor on average? After spending my first year of college in the very school I attended, I attained average vigor. I do n't look back with remorse at this outcome, because it was my effort. What I need to do now is I need to look for myself and give myself an opportunity for growth and development. And as a good time manager, I spend a lot of time on extracurricular activities and supporting the community, which is part of my life. The world is facing a global epidemic, and health is top priority as well, and that means that you have to be active, updating and improving your knowledge and skills. Regarding plans for the next few years, it is my intention to design for myself a good method of learning, expand my horizons, equip more expertise, enhance my professional skills to achieve a good outcome and a stable career. I was looking forward to receiving this portion of the scholarship, because it was also a valuable resource to help me progress on my journey to win my dreams about the future.

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