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Which hand to wear the red bracelet?

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In Buddhism, the red bracelet as a message to everyone to always open their hearts and give love. Therefore, wearing a red thread bracelet is always a controversial issue. Some folk beliefs say that: Married people should wear a red bracelet on their right hand, unmarried people should wear it on their left hand. However, from time immemorial, our grandparents had the saying "Male left, Female right. " So in this article, Thien Moc Huong introduces you to how to wear a red thread bracelet in the following way: Guys/boys should wear it on the left hand Girls/girls should wear it on the right hand Unimportantly on which hand to wear the bracelet. There's no effecting its benefits much so you can freely choose how to wear it to suit yourself.
In Buddhism, the
red
bracelet
as a message to everyone to always open their hearts and give
love
.
Therefore
, wearing a
red
thread
bracelet
is always a controversial issue.
Some
folk beliefs say that: Married
people
should
wear
a
red
bracelet
on their right hand, unmarried
people
should
wear
it on their
left
hand.

However
, from time immemorial, our grandparents had the saying
"
Male
left
, Female right.
"
So
in this article,
Thien
Moc
Huong
introduces you to how to
wear
a
red
thread
bracelet
in the following way:

Guys/boys should
wear
it on the
left hand


Girls/girls should
wear
it on the right hand

Unimportantly
on which hand to
wear
the
bracelet
. There's no effecting its benefits much
so
you can
freely
choose how to
wear
it to suit yourself.
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IELTS essay Which hand to wear the red bracelet?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
131 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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