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Which do you prefer, online learning or going to physical classrooms? Why?

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For three years learning online, I think I prefer online learning to going to physical classroom. It has many reasons to explain about my opinion. Firstly, online learning is an affordable way to learn for students. For instance, if the students study at the university, they will require to pay a lot of money for the transports, rent-house… etc. It costs more and more money than online learning. Secondly, studying an online course provide a flexible timing. The students can study at their own place that they want, and able to learn their skills or their desire course and subject on their suitable time. Moreover, we can improve our computer-skills such as Words-skills, Excel-skills and online preparation by learning online. In conclusion, the online learning has many benefits, and it helps people a lots, so I like it too much.
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about my opinion.
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is an affordable way to learn for students.
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money for the transports, rent-
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… etc. It costs more and more money than
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course provide a flexible timing. The students can study at their
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place that they want, and able to learn their
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or their desire course and subject on their suitable time.
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our computer-
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such as Words-
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, Excel-
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preparation by
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I like it too much.
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IELTS essay Which do you prefer, online learning or going to physical classrooms? Why?

Essay
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140 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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