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Coffee Consumption; the pros and cons

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Researchers and doctors reported that dinking coffee has a severity of health problems such as isomenia and heart diseases. Moreover, people consumed instant coffee are highly risk to obesity as it is mixed a large quantity of sugar and milk powder. I disagree to this statement as a coffee lover and constant consumer with several reasons. First, every food has it own limit to be consumed, not only coffee. It is not a great idea for over consumption in any kind of food, both drink and food. Drinking coffee does not cause severe health problems; however, the over consumption does. In addition to its appealing taste and smell, coffee is a kind of refreshment for a tiring day. A good start of a day is initiated by a cup of tasty coffee. There are also scientific findings that proof the beneficial aids to human’s health; such as coffee can reduce the risk of liver cancer. For coffee lovers, it is more than a drink, it is preferably to be seen as an art. Coffee shop oweners profondly decorate their shops and serve peaceful and chilling sense along with a cup of coffee. Every component in a coffee shop is artistic. People who love coffee tend to be seen with less stress than non-consumers as they usually spend their quality time in coffee shops and have a chance to relax their daily life. Or making a cup of coffee at home itself is relaxing. As a conclusion, it is not sure to state that coffee is deleterious or perish. In contrary, it is a beautiful art for people in terms of both physiological and emotional attractions. Nevertheless, the consumer should be aware of it consumption to be able to avoid reluctant health problems.
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dinking
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coffee
has a severity of
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health
problems such as
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isomenia
and heart diseases.
Moreover
,
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people
consumed instant
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are
highly
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risk
to obesity as it
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a large quantity of sugar and milk powder. I disagree to this statement as a
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coffee
lover and constant consumer with several reasons.

First
, every food has it
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own
limit to
be consumed
, not
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only
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coffee
. It is not a great
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idea
for over consumption in any kind of food, both drink and food. Drinking
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coffee
does not cause severe
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health
problems;
however
, the over consumption does.
In addition
to its appealing taste and smell,
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coffee
is a kind of refreshment for a tiring day. A
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good
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start
of a day
is initiated
by a cup of tasty
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coffee
. There are
also
scientific findings that proof the beneficial aids to human’s
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health
; such as
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coffee
can
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reduce
the
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risk
of liver cancer. For
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lovers, it is more than a drink, it is
preferably
to be
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seen
as an art.
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Coffee
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shop
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oweners
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profondly
decorate their
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shops
and serve peaceful and chilling sense along with a cup of
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coffee
. Every component in a
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coffee
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shop
is artistic.
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People
who
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love
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coffee
tend to be
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seen
with less
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stress
than non-consumers as they
usually
spend their quality time in
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coffee
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shops
and have a chance to relax their daily life. Or making a cup of
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coffee
at home itself is relaxing.

As a conclusion, it is not sure to state that
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coffee
is deleterious or perish. In contrary, it is a
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beautiful
art for
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people
in terms of both physiological and emotional attractions.
Nevertheless
, the consumer should be aware of it consumption to be able to avoid reluctant
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health
problems.
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IELTS essay Coffee Consumption; the pros and cons

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
292 words
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