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Which country will you choose to study abroad ?

Which country will you choose to study abroad? aVReP
There are many countries in the world. And most of them always welcome us to study abroad. Someone will choose Australia, England, Canada and more. But to me, I will choose the country where have the most international students in the world, that is America with more than 50000 international students every year America is in North America. The full name of this country is United States of America. America is one of the biggest countries in the world in the third with 9826675 kilometer square. The capital is Washington and there are many state like: Texas, Kansas, Montana and more. One of them is California and it also the state that I want to study abroad
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in the world. And most of them always welcome us to study abroad. Someone will choose Australia, England, Canada and more.
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to me, I will choose the
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where have the most international students in the world,
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America with more than 50000 international students every year

America is in North America. The full name of this
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is United
States of America. America is one of the biggest
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in the world in the third with 9826675 kilometer square. The capital is Washington and there are
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state like: Texas, Kansas, Montana and more. One of them is California and it
also
the state that I want to study
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IELTS essay Which country will you choose to study abroad?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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