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which coming from the beyonds

which coming from the beyonds yxxDD
This feeling remind me of the person who is living in my memory. Yet, my brain doesn't allow me to access the data of hers. Somehow, sometimes has happened a weird thing in my wired machine so that I could see the past with her. Moreover, when I was able to see that semi-fictional, one point perspective past, I suddenly realize if I couldn't remember the ghosts, which coming from the beyonds of my unconsciounsness, a realm of darkness, who can say that all of these happened sometime ago and now everything is becoming your thinking and deciding engine. If all these happened at micro-second and micro-matter influenced by unknown sensation coming from nature or simulated by itselfs of the machine why that data be a mistake because I never enjoyed if I didn't like, it sounds like cosmic hoax, may be it can be understand as a miracle without any meaning just like a similar shapes from in the sky.
This feeling remind me of the person who is living in my memory.
Yet
, my brain doesn't
allow
me to access the data of hers. Somehow,
sometimes
has happened a weird thing in my wired machine
so
that I could
see
the past with her.
Moreover
, when I was able to
see
that semi-fictional, one point perspective past, I
suddenly
realize if I couldn't remember the ghosts, which coming from the
beyonds
of my
unconsciounsness
, a realm of darkness, who can say that all of these happened sometime ago and
now
everything is becoming your thinking and deciding engine. If all these happened at micro-second and micro-matter influenced by unknown sensation coming from nature or simulated by
itselfs
of the machine why that data be a mistake
because
I never enjoyed if I didn't like, it sounds like cosmic hoax,
may be
it can be
understand
as a miracle without any meaning
just
like a similar
shapes
from in the sky.
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IELTS essay which coming from the beyonds

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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