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Describe an interesting town or city in your country that visitors might

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Anyone planning to visit Vietnam really should spend more time in Da Nang, a coastal city in the middle of my country. It has been widely regarded as the most desirable place to live in my nation. Da Nang has countless attractions of various landscapes and architectural styles, most notably among which are the Dragon Bridge crossing Han River, Linh Ung pagoda, Marble Mountains, My Khe beach … and so on. Of course since Da Nang is a coastal city, it’d be a huge mistake if I don’t mention its beautiful beaches and top-notch seafood. The seafood there is, without a doubt, amazing! They’re all incredibly cheap for their quality, and are exquisitely made into wonderful dishes by the local chefs – who really know how to bring the best flavor out of those precious ingredients.
Anyone planning to visit Vietnam
really
should spend more time in
Da
Nang
, a coastal city in the middle of my country. It has been
widely
regarded as the most desirable place to
live
in my nation.
Da
Nang
has countless attractions of various landscapes and architectural styles, most
notably
among which are the Dragon Bridge crossing Han River,
Linh
Ung
pagoda, Marble Mountains, My
Khe
beach … and
so
on.
Of course
since
Da
Nang
is a coastal city, it’d be a huge mistake if I don’t mention its
beautiful
beaches and top-notch seafood. The seafood there is, without a doubt, amazing! They’re all
incredibly
cheap
for their quality, and are
exquisitely
made into wonderful dishes by the local chefs
who
really
know how to bring the best flavor out of those precious ingredients.
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IELTS essay Describe an interesting town or city in your country that visitors might

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