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Which city in the world would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice v.2

Which city in the world would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice v. 2
Grading has been the most popular parameter to analyse performance of students in academics. Due to its imperatives, students often take marking schemes in a challenging manner, consequently, tending them to be under pressure. In my view, grades for sure encourage to perform well, however, whether it is motivating enough to learn is a questionable angle. In general, a good academic record is expected of every parent from their offspring. Now it depends that what criteria makes up for such record. The most prominently used factor to judge it is scoring in studies. Although, good grades may add a star in career life of an individual, it necessarily does not imply that learning got enhanced. Instead, in order to learn something, the motivation should be the curiosity and not the desire of being highest ranker. Scoring can encourage to remember things for short-term, nevertheless, it is not effective in learning for long-term. Apart from just being a scale for measuring better and best among scholars, furthermore, grading acts as a threshold barrier for considering a candidate as fail or pass. In this particular scenario, maybe this approach propels students to study, subsequently making them acquire knowledge too. But yet again, it does not guarantee if learning comes along excellently. In conclusion, I would like to say that the grading system is mostly a method to rank bunch of students. It may be a pushing factor only for some to actually learn concepts. Moreover, learning will always be accompanied by excellence for sure.
Grading has been the most popular parameter to
analyse
performance of
students
in academics. Due to its imperatives,
students
often
take marking schemes
in a challenging manner
,
consequently
, tending them to be under pressure. In my view, grades for sure encourage to perform well,
however
, whether it is motivating
enough
to learn is a questionable angle.

In general
, a
good
academic record is
expected
of every parent from their offspring.
Now
it
depends
that what criteria
makes
up for such record. The most
prominently
used
factor to judge it is scoring in studies. Although,
good
grades may
add
a star in career life of an individual, it
necessarily
does not imply that
learning
got
enhanced.
Instead
, in order to learn something, the motivation should be the curiosity and not the desire of being
highest
ranker. Scoring can encourage
to remember
things for short-term,
nevertheless
, it is not effective in
learning
for long-term.

Apart from
just
being a scale for measuring better and best among scholars,
furthermore
, grading acts as a threshold barrier for considering a candidate as fail or pass. In this particular scenario, maybe this approach propels
students
to study,
subsequently
making them acquire knowledge too.
But
yet
again, it does not guarantee if
learning
comes
along
excellently
.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that the grading system is
mostly
a method to rank bunch of
students
. It may be a pushing factor
only
for
some
to actually learn concepts.
Moreover
,
learning
will always
be accompanied
by excellence for sure.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Which city in the world would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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