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Government should provide free education to underprivileged people , other say give priority to other . Discuss both views.

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The expenditure on the needs of general public is a crucial part of government's budget. A fair amount of people believe that the legal authorities should give free coaching to the those people who are under poverty line while, some says that giving priority to the other sections of society is also important. In my opinion, government should give importance to providing free of cost education to the poor people, However other sections such as hospital and health facilities should also be given sufficient financial resources. On the one hand, higher authorities spending money on health facilities benefits people for all age groups. If more health centers are there, people can be treated well manner and easily they also not move to other cities for treatment. To exemplify, if health care service are at reasonable price because of support from regulatory authorities. It could became affordable for everyone to get treatment of disease. Hence, proper health care system plays significant role in individuals life. On the other side, higher bodies should provide free education to the people living under poverty line is that it will provide equal opportunity to everyone because few people cannot get the education because they cannot afford higher amount of fees. If the government provide the education at reasonable price than everyone can take the knowledge. for instance, in Punjab government build their own school and in this schools education is providing free of cost to everyone. Therefore, education is an important for everyone. Further more, if government provide free education, then the country will start developing which will lead the country in the right direction. Schooling should be easily available for everyone then child labor will also decrease because teenagers are the asset of their country. However, education to increase the knowledge and making one a better citizen. In conclusion, it seems that government providing free education to needy people is more significant rather than expenditure of other places.
The expenditure on the needs of
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general public
is a crucial part of
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government
's budget. A
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fair
amount of
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people
believe that the legal authorities should give
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free
coaching to the those
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people
who are under poverty line while,
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some
says that giving priority to the
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other
sections of society is
also
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important
. In my opinion,
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government
should give importance to providing
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free
of cost
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education
to the poor
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people
,
However
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other
sections such as hospital and
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health
facilities should
also
be
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given
sufficient financial resources. On the one hand, higher authorities spending money on
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health
facilities benefits
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people
for all age groups. If more
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health
centers are there,
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people
can
be treated
well manner and
easily
they
also
not
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move
to
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other
cities for treatment. To exemplify, if
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health
care service are at reasonable price
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because
of support from regulatory authorities. It could
The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "become"
became
affordable for
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everyone
to
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get
treatment of disease.
Hence
, proper
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health
care system plays significant role in individuals life. On the
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other
side, higher bodies should
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provide
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free
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education
to the
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people
living under poverty line is that it will
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provide
equal opportunity to
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everyone
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because
few
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people
cannot
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get
the
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education
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because
they cannot afford higher amount of fees.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
the
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government
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provide
the
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education
at reasonable price than
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everyone
can take the knowledge.
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for
instance, in Punjab
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government
build their
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own
school and in this
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schools
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education
is providing
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free
of cost to
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everyone
.
Therefore
,
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education
is an
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important
for
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everyone
.
Further
more, if
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government
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provide
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free
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education
, then the country will
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start
developing which will lead the country in the right direction. Schooling should be
easily
available for
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everyone
then child labor will
also
decrease
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because
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teenagers
are the asset of their country.
However
,
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education
to increase the knowledge and making one a better citizen.
In conclusion
, it seems that
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government
providing
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free
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education
to needy
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
is
more significant
rather
than expenditure of
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other
places.
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IELTS essay Government should provide free education to underprivileged people, other say give priority to other.

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