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whether news media have great influence on people's lives depicts an adverse development.

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To a number of individuals, news is a regular way of life. The issue in dispute is whether news media have great influence on people's lives depicts an adverse development. I am of the opinion that news media does more good than bad to the society. Information technology provides people with information they need on daily basis, although there are claims that it selects and report this news/ events that interest the audience. Evidence shows that people all walks of life have the habit of collecting information regularly from media such as broadcast, internet based media etcetera. Instruction helps in decision-making. For instance, intelligence on the outbreak of COVID -19. last year helped government of various countries to take proactive measures to minimize the spread of the virus. However, it should be of note that, news media can sometimes save lives and reduce casualties. There is a plethora of uncertainties in our surroundings and that masses are at risk of harm, kidnap and all manner of life threatening issues from crime, accident, as well as natural calamities. News media conveys first-hand instruction to concerned authorities, enabling them to take corresponding actions right away. Conclusively, it is pertinent to always listen to news always as this will help take them Away from harms way.
To a number of individuals,
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news
is a regular way of life. The issue in dispute is whether
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news
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media
have great influence on
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people
's
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lives
depicts an adverse development. I am of the opinion that
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news
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media
does more
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good
than
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bad
to the society.

Information technology provides
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people
with information they need on daily basis, although there are claims that it selects and report this news/
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events
that interest the audience. Evidence
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shows
that
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people
all walks of life have the habit of collecting information
regularly
from
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media
such as broadcast, internet based
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media
etcetera. Instruction
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helps
in decision-making.
For instance
, intelligence on the outbreak of
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COVID
-19.
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last
year
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helped
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government
of various countries to take proactive measures to minimize the spread of the virus.

However
, it should be of note that,
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news
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media
can
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sometimes
save
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lives
and
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reduce
casualties. There is a plethora of uncertainties in our surroundings and that masses are at
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risk
of harm, kidnap and all manner of life threatening issues from crime, accident,
as well
as natural calamities.
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News
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media
conveys
first
-hand instruction to concerned authorities, enabling them to take corresponding actions right away.

Conclusively
, it is pertinent to always listen to
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news
always as this will
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help
take them Away from harms way.
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IELTS essay whether news media have great influence on people's lives depicts an adverse development.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
213 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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