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Environmental changes affecting planet

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Global warming and the greenhouse effect have become an existential issue for all the species on earth in recent dates. However, a number of people are more concerned about certain plants and animals, while others are worried about more widespread effects on all the living creatures of the earth. Immediate effects of global warming is evident in certain flora and fauna, as a few species are at the brink of extinction like lions, tigers, and rhinoceros. Meanwhile, others debate that the entire ecosystem is interrelated and collapse of one species will create a domino effect that can lead to the eradication of the human species from the planet earth. According to my opinion not only the loss of specific species is critical but also addressing the causes of global warming. There is no doubt that it is imperative to preserve every living species on the planet. Animals and plants are going extinct faster than ever in the twenty-first century. For example, there is only a hand full of rhinoceros left in Africa because of poaching for their horn, which is used in traditional medicine. Similarly, lions, tigers, and elephants are being hunted every day for their ivory. The rapid rate of deforestation of the Amazon forests have put various life forms at risk, this can offset the natural balance creating a vicious cycle affecting others. Thus, an emphasis that the loss of certain lifeforms is critical. Discussion on prioritizing the list of important changes in the environment has been there for decades. Nevertheless, relevant questions every nation should be addressing are the cause of global warming, the solutions to mitigate the changes that are destroying the world, and preserve what is left. The hotter temperature in the antarctic and loss of ice sheets are of concern which is causing a rise in the sea levels, declining the walrus species, reducing the landmass, and increasing the size of the tear in the ozone layer. Consequently, a number of people believe in addressing the entire issue. To conclude, the loss of certain species of plants and animals and addressing other core issues are necessary. I stand by the notion that every living creature on earth is relevant, therefore the whole problem of environmental change should be addressed.
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Global
warming and the greenhouse
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effect
have become an existential issue for all the species on
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earth
in recent dates.
However
, a number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are more concerned about
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certain
plants and animals, while others
are worried
about more widespread effects on all the living creatures of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earth
. Immediate effects of
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global
warming is evident in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certain
flora and fauna, as a few species are at the brink of extinction like lions, tigers, and rhinoceros. Meanwhile, others debate that the entire ecosystem
is interrelated
and collapse of one species will create a domino
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
effect
that can lead to the eradication of the human species from the planet
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earth
. According to my opinion not
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only
the
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loss
of specific species is critical
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but
also
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addressing
the causes of
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global
warming.

There is no doubt that it is imperative to preserve every living species on the planet. Animals and plants are going extinct faster than ever in the twenty-
first
century.
For example
, there is
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only
a hand full of rhinoceros
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left
in Africa
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because
of poaching for their horn, which is
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used
in traditional medicine.
Similarly
, lions, tigers, and elephants are
being hunted
every day for their ivory. The rapid rate of deforestation of the Amazon forests have put various life forms at
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risk
, this can offset the natural balance creating a vicious cycle affecting others.
Thus
, an emphasis that the
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loss
of
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certain
lifeforms is critical.

Discussion on prioritizing the list of
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important
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changes
in the environment has been there for decades.
Nevertheless
, relevant questions every nation should be
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addressing
are the cause of
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global
warming, the solutions to mitigate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
that are destroying the world, and preserve what is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
. The hotter temperature in the antarctic and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
loss
of ice sheets are of concern which is causing a rise in the sea levels, declining the walrus species, reducing the landmass, and increasing the size of the tear in the ozone layer.
Consequently
, a number of
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people
believe in
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addressing
the entire issue.

To conclude
, the
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loss
of
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certain
species of plants and animals and
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addressing
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other
core issues are necessary. I stand by the notion that every living creature on
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earth
is relevant,
therefore
the whole problem of environmental
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change
should
be addressed
.
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IELTS essay Environmental changes affecting planet

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
375 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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