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Whether advertising are helpful or not.

Whether advertising are helpful or not. 7aRO3
Though advertising is not so much helpful for some people, generally speaking, it has wonderful effect to most of customers. TVs often conclude CMs and you have to watch them. In my case, I usually record programs and I skip them. I sometimes listen them as kinds of music as doing something like chores. For those are like me, CMs do not work as advertising. On the other hand, you can not skip on the internet. Website or short movie contain advertising and you cannot avoid passing through them. They are created carefully and some of them are really atractive. A number of firms spend lots oh money to make it by hireing famouse talents or visiting beautiful spots. They are strong connection with such things, promoting other industories. It is a great circle in terms of having benefits for more than two aspects. I wanted to use the same one when I watch my favorite artist group use the cosmetics. Also, you see the posters many times at stations, buildings, public transportations because they are put almost everywhere. The more you see it, the more you come to remember. I may have purchase the product when I see it in the store with my real eyes. I feel like I meet the one that I have been searching for a long time and even I would not see it again. Considering every factors, advertisements are helpful in atracting numerouse number of customers and necessarily things in our social economy.
Though advertising is not
so
much helpful for
some
people
,
generally
speaking, it has wonderful effect to
most of customers
.

TVs
often
conclude
CMs
and you
have to
watch
them. In my case, I
usually
record programs and I skip them. I
sometimes
listen them as kinds of music as doing something like chores. For those are like me,
CMs
do not work as advertising.
On the other hand
, you can not skip on the internet. Website or short movie contain advertising and you cannot avoid passing through them. They
are created
carefully
and
some
of them are
really
atractive
. A number of firms spend lots oh money to
make
it by
hireing
famouse
talents or visiting
beautiful
spots. They are strong connection with such things, promoting other
industories
. It is a great circle in terms of having benefits for more than two aspects. I wanted to
use
the same one when I
watch
my favorite artist group
use
the cosmetics.
Also
, you
see
the posters
many
times at stations, buildings, public transportations
because
they
are put
almost everywhere. The more you
see
it, the more you
come
to remember. I may have
purchase
the product when I
see
it in the store with my real eyes. I feel like I
meet
the one that I have been searching for a long time and even I would not
see
it again.

Considering every
factors
, advertisements are helpful in
atracting
numerouse
number of customers and
necessarily
things in our social economy.
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IELTS essay Whether advertising are helpful or not.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
250 words
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