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It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it good of bad development.

It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it good of bad development. 3aryJ
Based on researches done by prominent investigators it is opined that, 80% of masses are doing online shopping rather than to shop in stores or local markets. In this context it smoothly enumerates the reasons of increasing the trend of online shopping among masses. Under this proclamation, I would like to contemplate the view point before giving my verdict on the same. To initiate with, there are abundant benefits of home shopping. Electronic shopping saves the time. To exemplify, person order any item while sitting at home, they do not need to go market. Masses can easily clear the payment by credit card or debit card. Even cash on delivery is also available. Masses can easily do online shopping at any place. Besides this, individuals get better discounts on single item. Even in festivals people can get plethora of offers on each product. Here are plethora of online shopping sites like flipkart, amazon, nyka and number of more. Masses can get ample information of products like how to use it or what are the content of items. Finally, electronic shopping can change the lifestyle of humans. Looking at the darker picture, there are ample pessimistic key points of cyber shopping. First, if any person get defective item then it is extremely difficult to replace it. There are number of protocols that follow by person to replace the item. Similarly, side-effects is also major hindrance. There are plethora of beauty products which provide immensely side-effects to person skin. After considering all the view points it seems to me that, offline shopping is better rather than cyber shopping. While going to local street markets or malls masses will get valuable information of every item.
Based on researches done by prominent investigators it
is opined
that, 80% of masses are doing
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online
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shopping
rather
than to shop in stores or local markets. In this context it
smoothly
enumerates the reasons of increasing the trend of
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online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
among masses. Under this proclamation, I would like to contemplate the view point
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before
giving my verdict on the same.

To initiate with, there are abundant benefits of home
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shopping
. Electronic
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shopping
saves the time. To exemplify,
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person
order any
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item
while sitting at home, they do not need to go market. Masses can
easily
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clear
the payment by credit card or debit card. Even cash on delivery is
also
available. Masses can
easily
do
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online
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shopping
at any place.
Besides
this, individuals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
better discounts on single
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item
. Even in festivals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
plethora of offers on each product. Here are plethora of
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online
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shopping
sites like
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flipkart
,
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amazon
,
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nyka
and number of more. Masses can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
ample information of products like how to
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use
it or what are the content of
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items
.
Finally
, electronic
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shopping
can
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change
the lifestyle of humans.

Looking at the darker picture, there are ample pessimistic key points of cyber
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shopping
.
First
, if any
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person
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
defective
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item
then it is
extremely
difficult to replace it. There are number of protocols that follow by
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person
to replace the
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item
.
Similarly
,
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side-effects
is
also
major hindrance. There are plethora of beauty products which provide
immensely
Did you mean "side effects" (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.
side-effects
to
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person
skin. After considering all the view points it seems to me that, offline
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shopping
is better
rather
than cyber
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shopping
. While going to local street markets or malls masses will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
valuable information of every
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item
.
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IELTS essay It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it good of bad development.

Essay
  American English
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282 words
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