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Wherever the light goes in the light I always see a mysterious and a dazzling wonderland.

Wherever the light goes in the light I always see a mysterious and a dazzling wonderland. Kw3Ek
Wherever the light goes in the light I always see a mysterious and dazzling wonderland. CareLife is a club I joined during my freshman year. It happened to be the 15th anniversary at that time, thus we decided to design a special product for this occasion. In these designs I choose the earthly color not only to match the texture and feel of canvas, but also to bring out the spirit of our club of being down to earth. The dogs printed on the bags are the very stray dogs that we were taking care of.
Wherever the light goes in the light I always
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a mysterious and dazzling wonderland.

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CareLife
is a club I
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joined
during my freshman year. It happened to be the 15th anniversary at that time,
thus
we decided to design a special product for this occasion. In these designs I choose the
earthly
color not
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only
to match the texture and feel of canvas,
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but
also
to bring out the spirit of our club of being down to earth. The dogs printed on the bags are the
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very
stray dogs that we were taking care of.
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IELTS essay Wherever the light goes in the light I always see a mysterious and a dazzling wonderland.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
96 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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