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In some countries people earn extremely high salaries

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In some countries, people can earn extremely high salaries while others are struggling all over the world to make money to support their families. So, why not to equalize between all people? Why some of them are living in a high level and others are just waiting for money

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IELTS essay In some countries people earn extremely high salaries

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American English

1 paragraphs

48 words

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5.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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