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Some people believe men and women are equal and can do any job while other think women cannot work in all fields

Some people believe men and women are equal and can do any job while other think women cannot work in all fields GM3am
Now a days, with the economic, social and educational development some have come forward to keep their Pace with the man and are working hard to ensure that they can do anything and everything unlike man. But some people believe that womens cannot work in some specific fields while other believe that they are no less than men
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IELTS essay Some people believe men and women are equal and can do any job while other think women cannot work in all fields

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
57 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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