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I am writing to complain about a phone I ordered from your online shop on June 12, 2021. I have been one of your loyal clients for last four years and have been successful numerous transactions during the years. Nevertheless, this time, I am truly disappointed with service that you provided

I am writing to complain about a phone I ordered from your online shop on June 12, 2021. I have been one of your loyal clients for last four years and have been successful numerous transactions during the years. Nevertheless, this time, I am truly disappointed with service that you provided 2bx7b

I am writing to complain about a phone I ordered from your online shop on June 12, 2021. I have been one of your loyal clients for last four years and have been successful numerous transactions during the years. Nevertheless
, this time, I am truly
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IELTS essay I am writing to complain about a phone I ordered from your online shop on June 12, 2021. I have been one of your loyal clients for last four years and have been successful numerous transactions during the years. Nevertheless, this time, I am truly disappointed with service that you provided

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American English

1 paragraphs

50 words

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5.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 7.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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