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neat and clean, but construction work going behind of my room making unpleasant noises which make me almost immpossible to concentrate on my studies and work.

neat and clean, but construction work going behind of my room making unpleasant noises which make me almost immpossible to concentrate on my studies and work. 7a0QA
Let me explain my situation. The trouble started the day before yesterday when construction workers started to put a tie beam on the building. Prior to that, everything was extremely good and quieter. Now, whenever I came back to my room after finishing the classes, I feel a very high amount of noise hitting the ceiling of my room. Therefore, I am not able to sleep and complete my assignments on time which might affect my grades in the final examination.
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high amount of noise hitting the ceiling of my room.
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, I am not able to sleep and complete my assignments on time which might affect my grades in the final examination.
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IELTS essay neat and clean, but construction work going behind of my room making unpleasant noises which make me almost immpossible to concentrate on my studies and work.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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