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where you would prefer to live, anh why ?

where you would prefer to live, anh why? 3Y2Eb
Da Lat is known as the miniature Paris city with immense valleys, dense pine trees stretching endlessly. It is a city of beauty and romance. It has a cool, mild climate all year round, and the space possesses many famous scenic spots. Therefore, Da Lat city is not only a place you should try once to set foot in but also one of the most livable cities in Vietnam. If urban life has too much hustle and bustle, you feel Because you have to try to adapt and understand someone, Da Lat city will be very suitable for you, suitable for romantic, nature-loving souls.
Da
Lat
is known
as the miniature Paris city with immense valleys, dense pine trees stretching
endlessly
. It is a city of beauty and romance. It has a cool, mild climate all year round, and the space possesses
many
famous
scenic spots.
Therefore
,
Da
Lat city is not
only
a place you should try once to set foot in
but
also
one of the most livable
cities
in Vietnam. If urban life has too much hustle and bustle, you feel
Because
you
have to
try to adapt and understand someone,
Da
Lat city will be
very
suitable for you, suitable for romantic, nature-loving souls.
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IELTS essay where you would prefer to live, anh why?

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