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Where would you want to live if you have a choice.

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I like living in the countryside, because my childhood is tied to fields, villages and simple nature. Firstly, the rural environment is fresh more than in the city. Around the houses surrounded by luxuriant trees, lush green creates a cool atmosphere. Next, when going to the street without fear of being robbed on the road, this place is very good security. The people in my hometown are very rustic, close, dear and especially willing to welcome anyone here. Moreover, I love the green tea hills, it is a famous specialty in my hometown. A very fragrant tea, with a little bitter taste but it is delicious, attractive to drinkers. It was for these reasons that attracted me to live in the countryside. I believe that I will stick with this place throughout my life.
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to fields, villages and simple nature.
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, the rural environment is fresh more than in the city. Around the
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surrounded by luxuriant trees, lush green creates a cool atmosphere.
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being robbed
on the road, this place is
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very
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security. The
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people
in my hometown are
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very
rustic, close, dear and
especially
willing to welcome anyone here.
Moreover
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love
the green tea hills, it is a
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famous
specialty in my hometown. A
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very
fragrant tea, with a
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little
bitter taste
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it is delicious, attractive to drinkers. It was for these reasons that attracted me to
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live
in the countryside. I believe that I will stick with this place throughout my life.
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IELTS essay Where would you want to live if you have a choice.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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