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Value of friends in our life

Value of friends in our life MB0e9

Firstly, life is nothing without enjoyment and this enjoyment only comes with our loved one. Like, best friends. A children needs a friend. Birth to till then school life. Everyone have one single friend and close one, who's loving them most. with bestie we share our joy and sorrow of life. a close one always understand his friend. Moreover, always give them positive advice. if one person is sad or even his family understand them or not, but, their loved one's always trying to gives happiness to them. At the age of childhood. we playing with our friends and taking all problems related to studies. Rather than at the younger age, we are enjoying our every single moment with friend. At the end, this is always be the right companion, who's plays a best role in humans life.

Firstly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 is nothing without enjoyment and this enjoyment This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 one. Like, best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
. Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "A child" or simply "children"?A childChildren
A children
You should probably use "need".need
needs
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
. Birth to till then school You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. Everyone The pronoun 'Everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 one single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 and close one, who'The verb 'loving' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
s loving
 them most. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWith
with
The comma is probably missing here: "bestie, we".bestie, we
bestie we
 share our joy and sorrow of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterA
a
 close one always understand his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
. Moreover
, always give them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 advice. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
 one person is sad or even his family understand them or not, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 one's always trying to The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "give".give
gives
 happiness to them. At the age of childhood. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 playing with our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 and taking all problems related to studies. Rather
 than at the younger age, we are enjoying our every single moment with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, this is always Consider using a past participle here: "been".been
be
 the right companion, who's plays Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 best role in humans You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. 