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Where did you meeet her? how long have you known her? What influence has she had on your life?

Where did you meeet her? how long have you known her? What influence has she had on your life? 2a7Mw
When I saw Evelyn, I was sure that we were going to be very good friends. She was so nice! How could she ignore it? It was my first day at school when I saw her. She was alone, because she did not know anyone, she suddenly approached where she was and spoke to me, I remember that she was with her favorite bow tie. I have known her for 7 years, we went to many places in the company of some friends. We had a lot of good times together and I hope she continues like this. She influences my life in a positive way, she helps me with some problems I have and also helps her, our friendship is reciprocal. The best thing about her is that she is very kind and cares about others above herself.
When I
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saw
Evelyn, I was sure that we were going to be
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very
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good
friends. She was
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so
nice! How could she
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ignore
it?

It was my
first
day at school when I
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saw
her. She was alone,
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because
she did not know anyone, she
suddenly
approached where she was and spoke to me, I remember that she was with her favorite bow tie.

I have known her for 7 years, we went to
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many
places in the
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company
of
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some
friends. We had
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a lot of
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good
times together and I hope she continues like this.

She influences my life in a
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positive
way, she
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helps
me with
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some
problems I have and
also
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helps
her, our friendship is reciprocal.

The best thing about her is that she is
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very
kind and cares about others above herself.

IELTS essay Where did you meeet her? how long have you known her? What influence has she had on your life?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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