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describe a job that you want to do in the future

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Everyone has their dream job and so do I. In the future, I want to become a marketing manager. I think this is the right job for me because I'm outgoing, patient, organized and I love being a leader. Marketing is about promoting the company and making sure that customers can find products that meet their needs. I will have to use my marketing experience to design marketing campaigns and offer pricing strategies so that our company can compete better in the marketplace. I am in charge of the whole Marketing department in which I supervise and direct the work for everyone. In addition, I will also work in close connection to the Advertising, Sales and PR managers and report directly to my general manager. Becoming a marketing manager isn’t easy but I think it’s worth it. I hope that one day I will be a talented marketing manager.
Everyone has their dream job and
so
do I. In the future, I want to become a
marketing
manager
. I
think
this is the right job for me
because
I'm outgoing, patient, organized and I
love
being a leader.
Marketing
is about promoting the
company
and making sure that customers can find products that
meet
their needs. I will
have to
use
my
marketing
experience to design
marketing
campaigns and offer pricing strategies
so
that our
company
can compete better in the marketplace. I am in charge of the whole
Marketing
department in which I supervise and direct the work for everyone.
In addition
, I will
also
work in close connection to the Advertising, Sales and PR
managers
and report
directly
to my general
manager
. Becoming a
marketing
manager
isn’t easy
but
I
think
it’s worth it. I hope that one day I will be a talented
marketing
manager
.
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IELTS essay describe a job that you want to do in the future

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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