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Where did you go on your last holiday?

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Well, to be honest, I wish I could tell you about my experience set foot on some splendid and mesmerizing destinations. However, unfortunately, due to the spreading of the Covid-19 pandemic, Hanoi was basically locked down, we couldn't go out of Hanoi, we still thought but we didn't recommend doing so. On top of that, I had an intensive schedule at the time cause I was preparing for my IELTS exam and my senior year of high school. So I would say that was a long and tedious summer to me, or maybe the worst one.
Well, to be honest, I wish I could
tell
you about my experience set foot on
some
splendid and mesmerizing destinations.
However
, unfortunately, due to the spreading of the Covid-19 pandemic, Hanoi was
basically
locked down, we couldn't go out of Hanoi, we
still
thought
but
we didn't recommend doing
so
.
On top of that
, I had an intensive schedule at the time
cause I
was preparing for my IELTS exam and my senior year of high school.
So
I would say that was a long and tedious summer to me, or maybe the worst one.
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IELTS essay Where did you go on your last holiday?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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