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Think of as many points for and against watching TV as possible

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Nowadays, a lot of people stay connected television programmes. Watching tv has a lot of advantage and disadvantage activities. One of the main diadvantages of watching tv is that it is harmful for our eyes. Our eyes lose their ability to see when if we get used to watch television programmes many hours. Secondly, an amount of unclear programmes. They annoy viewers. Thirdly, TV programmes settle down in our brain and they distract our dreams and goals, they looks like mobile phone. TV often shows consuming alcohol, smoking and bad characters images. Young people interest in these works and copy bad characters. On the other hand, a lot of oadvantages in watching tv. Firstly, we see new information as soon as possible. Furthermore we see useful advertisements. Besides, channels have good programmes, for instance cooking or studying programmes. We learn a lot of reference from them. Finally older people don't bored with tv
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IELTS essay Think of as many points for and against watching TV as possible

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
152 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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