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Where are your colleagues/co-worker / employer fom and when have you experienced cultural differences between you?

Where are your colleagues/co-worker / employer fom and when have you experienced cultural differences between you? DwjRE

We all know that different country has unique cultures, me as from Philippines has a different cultures and with my employer here at Taiwan. For example in religion, because of their religion I adopt the procedures how to prepare the differences food to offer on praying day, which in our culture is not that so much more. I also noticed that the priority of some people herein Taiwan is to prolong the life of elderly person as long as they have the capability to restore the life, they will do it. People in Taiwan wanted to be more healthy they don't like to eat with more preservatives, they are more aware about the wellness of their body. About my colleagues we both different cultures and I experince about the way they handle their finances. And I learned from them to way be thrifty and I am proud of that.

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