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I suppose that sports do not need expensive equipment or any special occasion. For instance, with football, we just need to have a ball, shoes and a piece of land, or even where you can play this sport. However, doing sports, especially team sports, is not for the amateurs as no one helps you to correct the mistakes, thus you can’t develop skills. Moreover, if you don’t have the sport’s equipment, you are not able to perform perfectly. But for me, I still think that we have to have the sports equipment but not the expensive ones. 3.

I suppose that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 do not need expensive equipment or any special occasion. For instance
, with football, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 need to have a ball, shoes and a piece of land, or even where you can play this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
. However
, doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
, especially
 team You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
, is not for the amateurs as no one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 you to correct the mistakes, thus
 you can’t develop This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. Moreover
, if you don’t have the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport’s
 equipment, you are not able to perform perfectly
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 for me, I still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 have the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 equipment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not the expensive ones.

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