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when you were a child, how did you spend your weekends?

when you were a child, how did you spend your weekends? n1KKo

When I was a kid, I used to spend the whole time staying at home with my family, sometimes with my friends. We watched TV, had dinner, hang out together, and occasionally we went to restaurants and shopping. When I was with my bestie, I frequently decided to go out to eat, go to the movies, read books and cook together. That was a marvelous time to me. But now, my time is quite busy, so the time for family and friends seems to be reduced a lot. I have a lot of things havent been done with my own business. I always try my best to get the job done as soon as possible. it's maybe simple to be around our own family but for me it's the most precious thing that i always appreciate.

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