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In the text I am writing, I want to offer sweeping material about construction in several countries, including Iran. Of course, what some sites write to attract users to sign up for that site is quite egotistical. I refrain from writing this charming material in order to write reliable information. I try to use assured tips. One of the world's mannered centers in the engineering debate that has a decisive place in global societies is the United States. There is no clumsy architecture in this country. Architecture in America has been able to have a gradual increase in these few centuries that have been contemporary. Buildings built in the United States have a marked difference, thanks to the presence of elites in different countries. However, compared to China, the United States has had a temporary leveling out. Of course, we, the people of Iran, hope that our beloved country, just as it is one of the most powerful countries in the world in terms of military power and a threat to the United States and the occupying regime of Jerusalem (Israel), will compensate for a slight decline in architecture and have a steady rise instead. Usually our engineers have abrupt achievements. As an Iranian citizen and student, I believe in the skills of Iranian engineers and wish that the current status quo in the field of civil engineering improves. Of course, so far our engineers have had enormous problems and infinitesimal income, which is why some of them have migrated to countries such as Canada, the United States, Australia and the United Kingdom. But despite the efforts of Western countries and in the face of US sanctions, fortunately, relying on their skills, they have been able to make up for these profound shortcomings step by step. However, these weaknesses have been blended with the strengths of these motivated and young engineers. Unfortunately, we also have engineers who are stand out from the pious, faithful and revolutionary engineers who are very responsible. These incompetent engineers are very skewed. Also, these cowards from a moral point of view; gullible, complacent and hypocritical. The existence of these incompetent engineers; It has caused some popular engineers to opt out. That's why diagnosing these two groups of engineers is so difficult. I personally do not like these dredful, irresponsible, cruel and invasive engineers. And I like to eradicate them with a powerful tap and advanced cyberbulling. In my opinion, we should pay a disposable income of zero rials to this group of engineers. In this text, my main goal was to use the words in the vocabulary book for IELTS. For this reason, I reduced the accuracy of the text and focused on the use of words.
In the text I am writing, I want to offer sweeping material about construction in several
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countries
, including Iran.
Of course
, what
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
sites write to attract users to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
up for that site is quite egotistical. I refrain from writing this charming material in order to write reliable information. I try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
assured tips.

One of the world's mannered centers in the engineering debate that has a decisive place in global societies is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
States
. There is no clumsy architecture in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. Architecture in America has been able to have a gradual increase in these few centuries that have been contemporary.

Buildings built in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
States
have a marked difference, thanks to the presence of elites in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
.
However
, compared to China, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
States
has had a temporary leveling out.
Of course
, we, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of Iran, hope that our beloved
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
,
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just
as it is one of the most powerful
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countries
in the world in terms of military power and a threat to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
States
and the occupying regime of Jerusalem (Israel), will compensate for a slight decline in architecture and have a steady rise
instead
.
Usually
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
have abrupt achievements.

As an Iranian citizen and student, I believe in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
of Iranian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
and wish that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
status quo in the field of civil engineering
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
.
Of course
,
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so
far our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
have had enormous problems and infinitesimal income, which is why
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of them have migrated to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
such as Canada, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
States
, Australia and the
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United
Kingdom.
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But
despite the efforts of Western
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countries
and in the face of US sanctions,
fortunately
, relying on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, they have been able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up for these profound shortcomings step by step.

However
, these weaknesses have
been blended
with the strengths of these motivated and young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
. Unfortunately, we
also
have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
who are stand out from the pious, faithful and revolutionary
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engineers
who are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
responsible. These incompetent
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engineers
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
skewed.
Also
, these cowards from a moral point of view; gullible, complacent and hypocritical.

The existence of these incompetent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
; It has caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
to opt out. That's why diagnosing these two groups of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
difficult. I
personally
do not like these
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dredful
, irresponsible, cruel and invasive
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engineers
. And I like to eradicate them with a powerful tap and advanced
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cyberbulling
.

In my opinion, we should pay a disposable income of zero rials to this group of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineers
. In this text, my main goal was to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the words in the vocabulary book for IELTS.
For this reason
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
the accuracy of the text and focused on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of words.
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IELTS essay sweeping material about construction

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
452 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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