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When you speak one language, you are a person; however, when you know two language you are more than a person.

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When you speak one language, you are a person; however, when you know two language you are more than a person. Many people believe that learning a foreign language is for travel or work in different country; on the other hand, the others think to speak another language is more than that. In my opinion, language is the perfect way to improve yourself. In this essay, I discuss the both views and gave my personal opinion. In first view, humans learn another language for jobs or visit abroad; as a result, somebody who work in another land knows this country's tangue. For instance, plenty of doctors in Turkey try to learn German for work in Germany as it is a nessesity. If you want to travel in the World, you should learn English. To sum up, they think that people learn for these purposes. On the other hand, others think people are studying a different language for education. For example, when, you learn English you can get access to huge amount of information. If you want to be a essential scientist, you must learn English. Hence, people can learn English for knowledge. In my view to learn more than your mother tangue has been a lot of reasons. Humans have variety life expectations. For example, I am studying English for educational reasons. I will apply to universities in United Kingdoom so i have to learn it. In conclusion, people have numerous life-expectation that is why they want to improve themselves. Learning a skill is a key way to success; however, the reason of this studying can be different.
When you speak one
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language
, you are a person;
however
, when you know two
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language
you are more than a person.
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people
believe that learning a foreign
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language
is for travel or work in
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different
country; on the
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other
hand, the others
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think
to speak another
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language
is more than that. In my opinion,
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language
is the perfect way to
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improve
yourself. In this essay, I discuss the both views and gave my personal opinion.

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In
first
view, humans
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learn
another
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language
for jobs or visit abroad;
as a result
, somebody who work in another land knows this country's
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tangue
.
For instance
,
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plenty
of doctors in Turkey try to
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learn
German for work in Germany as it is a
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nessesity
. If you want to travel in the World, you should
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learn
English. To sum up, they
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think
that
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people
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learn
for these purposes.

On the
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other
hand, others
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think
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people
are studying a
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different
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language
for education.
For example
, when, you
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learn
English you can
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get
access to huge amount of information. If you want to be
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a
essential scientist, you
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must
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learn
English.
Hence
,
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can
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learn
English for knowledge.

In my view to
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learn
more than your mother
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tangue
has been
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a lot of
reasons. Humans have variety life expectations.
For example
, I am studying English for educational reasons. I will apply to universities in United
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Kingdoom
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i
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have to
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learn
it.

In conclusion
,
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people
have numerous life-expectation
that is
why they want to
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improve
themselves. Learning a
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skill
is a key way to success;
however
, the reason of this studying can be
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different
.
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IELTS essay When you speak one language, you are a person; however, when you know two language you are more than a person.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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