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today routine at my home.discuss about detail

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i woke up at 8 am then i took breakfast. i went to academy at 9; 15 am. where i attempted two practice test which one is listening and other one is reading test. after 11 am i came back at my home. i took some rest because of hot weather. then i did some home chores. after that i offered asar prayer and i started to my ilets preparation am pretty serious about ilets exam because this most important for me to get high score.

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 woke up at 8 am then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 took breakfast. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 went to academy at 9; 15 am. where Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 attempted two practice This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 which one is listening and other one is reading This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 11 am Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 came back at my home. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 took This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 rest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of hot weather. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 home chores. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 offered Possible spelling mistake found.agarafarASAPASSRAdarajar
asar
 prayer and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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started
 to my Possible spelling mistake found.letsisletsinletsi lets
ilets
 preparation am pretty serious about Possible spelling mistake found.letsisletsinletsi lets
ilets
 exam This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 high score. 

IELTS essay today routine at my home. discuss about detail

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

86 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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