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what do you think of corona virus?

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Nowadays, there are so many countries all around the world that they are managing their people to not get affected by the coronavirus. However, it is my idea that this action only takes place with people's assistance. Many experts believe that governments should force their people to respect healthcare laws. In this way, governors have established some rules about society's healthcare. Currently, people have to wear masks in public places, have social distancing with others, and contribute in vaccination. These actions would help society to have viruses obsolete. It has been argued that social distancing may cause problems in people relationships, the economy, and education. Nevertheless, people believe that the experts and the governments should come up with a better plan to prevent the coronavirus from being spread between people. In general, it seems to me that there are no other options to stand against the coronavirus being expanded. We have to obey the healthcare rules to protect ourselves and our loved ones.
Nowadays, there are
so
many
countries all around the world that they are managing their
people
to not
get
affected
by the coronavirus.
However
, it is my
idea
that this action
only
takes place with
people
's assistance.

Many
experts believe that
governments
should force their
people
to respect healthcare laws. In this way, governors have established
some
rules
about society's healthcare.
Currently
,
people
have to
wear masks in public places, have social distancing with others, and contribute in vaccination. These actions would
help
society to have viruses obsolete.

It has
been argued
that social distancing may cause problems in
people
relationships, the economy, and education.
Nevertheless
,
people
believe that the experts and the
governments
should
come
up with a better plan to
prevent
the coronavirus from
being spread
between
people
.

In general
, it seems to me that there are no other options to stand against the coronavirus
being expanded
. We
have to
obey the healthcare
rules
to protect ourselves and our
loved
ones.
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IELTS essay what do you think of corona virus?

Essay
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4 paragraphs
163 words
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